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Mar
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let me go — you did

let me close my eyes..
as i tried to feel you,
as i went back home,
as you set me on doubt..

let me do the silence..
as my heart pounds of us,
as i tilt my head back,
as i slept over a dream..

let me sweat and shiver..
as i embrace this cold,
as i hope for love,
as i miss my lady..

let me breathe for a while..
as the song played,
as i finish the poetry,
as i bleed..

August 13, 2005




11 Responses to “let me go — you did”


  1. 1    NaNik March 25, 2006 at 9:08 pm

    She didn’t.believe me..

  2. 2    t ii t a April 18, 2006 at 12:38 am

    I knew u since u were a crazy boy playin lego. (hayah…) I believed u would find somebody new… AND U DO !!!
    Tapi jangan semangat2!!! Ngisin2i…

  3. 3    Kikit April 19, 2006 at 4:29 am

    ^_^v maaf tit..

    i did everything i could to stop me from asking such stupid question..
    but she’s really something.

    thanks, sis.

  4. 4    NaNik April 23, 2006 at 1:37 am

    thx..miz u all.

  5. 5    NaNik April 23, 2006 at 1:46 am

    PS : nice to hear that..

  6. 6    Kikit April 23, 2006 at 4:10 am

    hahaha…

    @NaNik
    iya deh. tapi tx-nya buat yg mana nik?
    ama nice to hear which one?

  7. 7    beRLin April 24, 2006 at 12:55 am

    he he…
    no comment ah..
    piss.. (^-^)v

  8. 8    Kikit April 25, 2006 at 12:35 am

    hahaha… itu juga udah comment, ber. gj!

  9. 9    NaNik May 21, 2006 at 6:28 am

    Ada deh…mau tau ajah ;”)
    oya, ’she’ di 1st comment ku itu kan refers to someone whom u dedicated ur poetry to…
    moga2 yg ’she’ di comment mu bt tita juga ^_^
    btw, thx yach bt yg barusan.i do appreciate tht.

  10. 10    Kikit May 21, 2006 at 8:00 am

    @tiita
    piye kie tit penake.. (”,)

  11. 11    NaNik May 30, 2006 at 6:11 am

    heheee…
    i got ur idea kok sbnernya.
    makanya nice 2 hear that (anyway)… i do happy 4 u ^_^
    wish u all the best deh pokokna…

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